Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Do you like my novel?

It would be a lot easier to read if it were split into paragraphs (you know, starting a new paragraph when there's dialogue, etc). From what I read, though, it was good. You could add a little more description of the settings maybe. It was funny, though. I could relate to some of the things going on (how she wished the school would blow up, getting in trouble for her skirt, etc). Keep writing =)

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